The writing below me is my writing task for the week.
I have been working on it for the whole week!
I hope you guys think its good.
If there are any mistakes please feel free to comment!
My heart was pounding.
At a slow pace I made myself get in the cave.
Inch by inch, moment by moment.
Then I delicately touched the ground.
I explored the cave step by step.
I could see and hear the water rushing.
Rocks were neighbouring me.
“Wow!” I echoed
The cave was painted in darkness.
Splashing little sparks as the most admiring glow worms that showed the way.
I gulped.
Every time I took a step it felt like the cave was swallowing me in.
I made the decision and ‘splash!’ went the cold water.
Some of the water managed to crawl inside my mouth.
It was a disgusting lasting taste.
The water was the slightest bit deep so I decided to float and swim around.
I was terrified but it was still very adventurous!
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