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We have been looking at persuasive writing. We had to choose a topic to write about in persuasive writing style. I chose the topic, 'should students be allowed to wear mufti everyday?'. Here is my answer and writing. Maybe I was successful into persuading you into my opinion? :)
My answer: no, at least not everyday.
Three main points:
- Because of the many different school activities we have during the day, (sports, art etc), there would be a lot of washing and clothes going to waste.
- There would be dress code and nobody likes dress code.
- People might get teased for what they wear.
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A good amount of students would probably want to wear mufti to school everyday. Perhaps to show a new piece of clothing they got. Or maybe they would rather prefer to express themselves through clothes instead of being stuck to wearing uniform. But the point is, should they be allowed to wear mufti at school?
Many students have an interest in sports. Specifically, rugby and most of the time, things get quite intense and it would result in muddy uniform. Even paint can get on our uniforms. That could result in upsetti spaghetti moms. So if we were to allow students to wear mufti, could you imagine how much money would go to waste? And how much washing there’d be?
We rarely get dress coded because of the fact we wear uniform and every now and then, somebody has to get a dress pass because their not wearing the Pt England School polo shirt. If mufti was allowed everyday, some students could be quite immature and might wear something with something inappropriate on it. And I doubt anybody wants to get dress coded and have to wear somebody else's' clothes.
Let’s face the fact that there would probably be people teasing others for what they wear. Maybe it’s due to the difference in style, but some people find the opportunity to tease somebody for anything. The idea of mufti everyday could possibly lower somebody’s self esteem just because of them wearing clothes they enjoy being in. Nobody should have to deal with that.
In conclusion, students should not be able to wear mufti everyday. Of course when the occasional mufti day, wacky hair day, or wheels day comes up, it’s more than OK for somebody to wear mufti because that’s an exception.
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