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Monday 27 May 2019

Aye-Myat Narrative Writing - Week 3



Once upon a time,there was a girl named Adri. She owned a puppy named CoCo.
One day Adri and CoCo went around for a walk at Mission Bay beach.
Adri went for a swim and CoCo decided to go for a swim as well in the sparkly salty water.


Luckily for Adri she brought a surfboard with her.
Adri lifted CoCo onto the rubbery material from the surfboard and she gave CoCo a little push so she can try to surf. Adri would guard CoCo in case she would fall out.
Adri took her eyes off from CoCo just for a little moment and when she looked back Coco was already far away in the distance.


She tried to swim after he but it was not hope, she couldn't swim that far she tried and tried to reach her precious puppy. All she could see was mountainous mountains and the navy blue water.

Sooner enough CoCo spotted a island and hopped of the surfboard felt lonely without her owner.CoCo knew she wasn’t going to survive on the island all by herself.

A couple of minutes later CoCo was starving she knew she can't just be stranded on an island forever she was determined to go and swim...but there was 1 problem CoCo didn’t know how to swim!.How is it going to be possible for a puppy to cross a island if they can't even swim!.

”I can do it” barked CoCo.


As CoCo stepped a paw into the water she attempted to doggy paddle and she did it! And so she paddled and paddled.15 minutes later CoCo was reaching the shore and in the distance she could see Adri!.Adri was upset.

“Oh I hope my puppy comes back!”.

Suddenly Adri saw a furry little monster approaching out of the water.It was hard to tell what it was.But it was actually just her puppy CoCo.

Adri ran and gave CoCo the biggest hug ever.

And they lived happily ever after.The End.










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