Dangerous writing task

This is another one of my 5 minute writing tasks.There are some spelling mistakes but that is due to the 5 minutes and I had to write as fast as I could or else I would have to start again!So enjoy!The picture we had to write about was a car stuck in a pool.

There once was a family of 2.
The 2 people were brother and they live together.
There names were Tom and Don.
Tom an Don weren't the most wisest people in the world.They actually weren't very wise at all!
So when one day the younger brother Tom drove through the apartment building they were shocked.The slightest push and it was the end for their car.So Tom quickly ran out of the car leaving it on it's own.
'splash!' went the car as it buried it's self into the cold pool water.From a birds eye view the car looked like it was wafting from the water.

To be Continued...