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Friday 27 March 2020

Can she save her?

It was a wonderful, nice and sunny day. Adrian (a girl) was walking around her friendly neighborhood, saying nice things and waving.

She was really walking outside to go to her own little roof. Adrian is very shy but she has lots of talent. ‘Her own little roof’ meaning the top of a very tall building. Nobody ever really called her out, not even if they saw her.

The reason is because that building was a working area until people closed down the building because there were not many clients to work or money being made. The building was going to be crushed for a new start until the builder’s realized there weren’t essentials or things to build that others needed at the time. So Adrian walks over there when she wants some peaceful time.

Adrian has very strict rules in her family, for starters she can’t go out with her friends specifically on Mondays, Tuesdays, Thursdays or Sunday! The rest of the days she can go out but she has to always be home 7pm SHARP! Her parents chose those days because she has to work on her homework. If she has finished it on one of the days she has to clean the house up. So either way she loses.

Now you may be wondering how does she get up on the roof? Well, she is like spiderman she can climb up brick or smoothed surfaces! Even I don’t know how; People assume that with her strict parents (which I will introduce to you later) take her to climbing sessions. I wonder who her teacher is because they must have SKILLS!

Now about her parents Mrs and Mr Kim. Mrs Kim was full of ATTITUDE! She was sassy, fierce and fashionable. She was nice at times. She was skinny, slim and basically fit. Mr Kim on the other hand was smart, nerdy and is anything but fashionable. If there was a trend Mr Kim would probably wear that trend the next year.

Now back to Adrian, she got onto the top of the building,
“Ah, peace at last!” she said relievingly.

She went to the edge of the building, looking at the view she has seen at least a million times now. Then she sat on the edge and kicked her legs back and forth.

Then Thanos come out of nowhere (this makes sense because the city her family and her live in is the city where pretty much every superhero and supervillain lives) he pushes her from behind down the very tall building!

“Ah!!......” Adrian screamed her head off!
“ oh no, I am about to reach the end of the building ahh!” She closed her eyes tightly shut.

Suddenly, she felt the moving stop, she felt like she was floating instead of falling. She opened her eyes…

“Oh my GOSH! It’s BATGIRL!” Adrian said.

Yes, in fact it was Batgirl who happened to see everything from flying above.

“Thanos has been up to no good lately, and this time he HAS to go to jail;” Said Batgirl

“Stay right here I will be back, I will deal with him!” So Batgirl flew up and called the police.

The sirens got closer and closer. Finally he was gone in the backseat of the vecichle.

“This is not the end!” Thanos yelled as the noise of the sirens became fainter and fainter.

“Looks like he won’t be back for a long time” said Batgirl giggling.

“Oh, by the way..Thanks for saving me” Adrian replied while smiling.

“No problem, it’s like my job, call me and we can get to know each other. You seem like a nice girl, I would love to hang out with you on the roof, of course when your parents let you.”

“How do you know about my parents rules?” Adrian said curiously.

Batgirl just winked and flew into the sky.
“Wait, you didn’t give me your number..” Shouted Adrian.
But then she could feel something in her pocket. It was her number and it also said, ‘love Batgirl’.

TO BE CONTINUED...

2 comments:

  1. Hi Aye,

    This is a fantastic piece of writing. I really like how you described Mr and Mrs Kim, you used a lot of good describing words so that the reader can connect with them better. I was really worried that Adrian was going to fall to the ground, very glad that Bat Girl came to her rescue. I also love how you have ended the story and shown that these two girls will be friends. Do you think that Adrian might one day end up helping Bat Girl catch the villains?

    Keep up the great writing!

    Miss Parrant

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    1. Thanks Miss Parrant,
      Maybe I will end up doing a series of these 2 girls?
      Aye

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