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This is my 5th task for the Summer Learning Journey! I had to make a Haiku Poem about Summer. I am a beginner to Haiku poems so my Haiku Poem isn't the best but I still hope you like it!
Please leave a positive comment :)
Great job! I love how you have done a how-to style for people who are new to this.
ReplyDeleteMy only advice would be to make it a bit shorter if you want to keep your viewers interested!
Hey Charlie!
DeleteThank you so much for the feedback and the positive note! It's really helpful and I will definitely use it to improve in the future!
Thanks again Charlie,
Aye :)
Hi Aye,
ReplyDeleteIts me Jade from school. I really like your haiku poem about summer because it looks really fun to do.Have you done eny of those things yet????.
From Jade
Hi Jade!
DeleteThank you so much! I haven't been swimming in the beach YET but I will!
Love you,
Aye :)
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Aye Myat, Kiana-Marino here from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteHika! Wow, this is awesome. Thank you for sharing your haiku video with us on your blog, you seem to be a natural when it comes to screencastify.did you find it hard to record your self? You have done such an amazing job at presenting it to other bloggers and myself. I must agree with the comments made above about how you have done it in a “how to do” style video, this encourages others to learn it as well which is great.
Just like you I get excited for summer because of the mount of swimming under the sun that is involved. I hope you have a wonderful summer this season.
Keep up the good mahi, I look forward to your response and future posts from you.
Ngā mihi
Kiana-Marino
Hello Kiana!
DeleteThank you so much! I am truly flattered with your positive comments! I didn't find it hard recording myself, I have done it loads of times before and I like sort of having the spotlight on me (only a bit though)!
I hope you have an amazing summer too!
Aye :)